Shiooooot! First time I've read something like this, and I'm loving it!

Update soon please!

Please update soon!

Ooo, it's all sci-fi and stuf. Keep it up, this is so interesting! I hope you get well soon, I will pray for your health!

I'm still catching up with the story, it looks really, really promising :D (I'm hoping to see some Chelley ahead, but that's because I love shipping them xD) I know you're not a native English speaker, neither am I, but be careful with the vocabulary. The correct word is "report" :) and run a spell check too, just for a few minor spelling mistakes. I always double check with , it's really useful!

This is a great story and I have only 1 question. Can I haz Atlas and Penny? I luv dem already! *Fangirl squeals over the entire story*

PS: make somthing go hilariously wrong it would be so cool (and hilariously awesome) if you did that please.

good job so-far i followed your book for awhile and liked it so good job with the new chapter... Update soon please.

AWESOMENESS

there really aren't enough fanfictions like this around...

can i haz some moar? please?

oh, and you need moar GLaDOS. coz she's awesome.

I like this. It is quite interesting, although sometimes it doesn't make sense. Also you should look over your story for all those spelling mistakes. Keep writing!

interesting...

I really like this story and I am very impressed with your English. You only have a few small mistakes in grammar and spelling. (English is hard, even when one has been speaking it for most of one's life.) So I applaud you for that. This is amazing well written and has funny little bits that I love. One thing to look out for: You tend to seperate your sentences a lot with paragraph breaks, try to keep the same thoughts in one paragraph; so when you have a paragraph break it will either be more dramatic in what you're trying to convey, or transfer the flow of thoughts better. Does that make sense? Sorry if I confuse you or anything. One more thing, do you use a proofreader? I think it will help you with spelling and weird English grammar rules. Freaking English. :( I could look over it for you and point out any things in the first few chapters.

I like your story a lot, and please don't take any of this personally, I just want to help. please continue because I really, really like this story!

Listen, I'm going to be perfectly and completely honest here and I think it's something you need to hear.

You have a great story.

An excellent story.

Don't take anything I'm about to say the wrong way.

But it's not a Portal story.

Sure, the characters and places all have the same names and all that, but everything is changed, everything is very different.

This is your chance here: MAKE IT YOUR OWN STORY.

You've taken it far enough fro the original source that it's pretty much not Portal any more. You could easily make this a short story, a chaptered story, something not a fanfic!

It's a great story, it deserves more.

so, what your saying is,

"atlas isnt nesecarily ATLAS, he just has ATLAS's personality"

sounds like human ATLAS to me.

curtisimo - minor brain fart

is CC the companion cube, or did you think rick (adventure core) was telling the truth about himself?