Well, I'm going to write this from two perspectives, if only to get out all of my thoughts on this story.

Subjective:

The couple is quite nice. Had it not been, I wouldn't have read it in the first place. One reason I like them is because they are so culturally different. But writers, such as yourself, can meld these two culturally diverse beings into a simply splendid couple. I found the thorough details in this story very pleasant to read. What I didn't exactly like was (because of my own views) the part about sex versus making love. It doesn't seem right to me for a couple to be all right with their special other having sex with others. But I suppose that's just me. Another thing that wasn't exactly my cup of tea was the mention of drugs, but as said in the story, people have flaws. I did appreciate the detailed description of the feeling of it, though. I feel that it fits perfectly.

Objective: This story is thorough and well-written, with little to no (none that I could point out) grammatical and/or spelling errors. Each idea/topic was explained in length, and all in all the story is well-made and interesting. It has many truths in it, which is something not all stories have.

So there! Good job. A tad bit dark to me, but still verah nice.

3 Nya

Awww,i did not notice i spelled Herakles wrong in my other review.(face vs palm) Anyways, you are on a roll! Hmm...if i am correct, that was 2 stories in one day! :3

Very interesting piece. I like how you explored the differences between them, especially the one about Greece being physically involved with others but emotionally involved with Japan only.