|Reviews for The Good Brother|
| Nelum Camilla 9/18/12 . chapter 3
lets see what happens. :)
| Nelum Camilla 9/18/12 . chapter 2
| Nelum Camilla 9/18/12 . chapter 1
| Maclaney 5/25/12 . chapter 1
I expect this to be an interesting variation and look forward to the rest of the book. However, the text requires much editing with respect to punctuation and sentence structure, as well as paragraph formation. Generally speaking, paragraphs should be more than one sentence, one major exception being the flow of conversation from person to person.
And I'm on to the next chapter(s). Thanks for your offering.
| Katzenpfote 4/25/12 . chapter 36
| Beloved Daughter 3/14/12 . chapter 36
I love this story! You are quite the writer! I originally didn't read the story because I didn't see how Darcy marrying Anne could lead to happiness, but you managed it masterfully.
I love how you write all the characters. Thanks for writing and sharing this beautiful story!
| penacka 3/5/12 . chapter 1
Amazing story so far, I'm excited to read it all!
| Sun N Air 2/27/12 . chapter 36
Thankyo soo much to post this story...havent read a decent one in AGES! Thanks again :D
| srrdk 2/23/12 . chapter 36
ah! Lovely ending! This was one good plot! I really enjoyed reading this one... and with the Earl moving into netherfield, BRILLIANT! Haha! That's where I was stumped!
well, now I understand, and I'm truly truly truly loving this! :)
| m0ckingbird77 2/21/12 . chapter 36
Dear Daniella Harwood,
I must inform you of the depth of my love for this story. IT IS BEYOND AMAZING... I am so sorry I did not review more. The words, thoughts and actions made my days as I read them.
Haha, I tried to be serious, but I am too excited! Your writing is beautiful, and the plots and characters are very well formed. :D :D :D
| betsal 2/16/12 . chapter 36
I've enjoyed reading this story, it was a great reading.
| Alexis Winn 2/14/12 . chapter 36
Wow. I'm glad I'm didn't stumble on this while it was being published. I think I would've cried double the tears - one batch of the angst and one for the waiting of the resolution.
I love this story, having already marked it for a re-read. There was so much angst here, and this story is certainly a romance. And yet, these two people are still so absolutely Elizabeth and Darcy. They're very recognizable, and I adored that. It was a good story regardless, but that it was a good story revisiting two characters I hold dear in my heart made it so, so much more than worth all the angst.
| DLGirl 2/9/12 . chapter 36
Wonderful story I look forward to the next one.
| cpamyb 2/9/12 . chapter 36
Lovely...just lovely! Can't wait for the next one :)
| C. Isabel 2/8/12 . chapter 36
I actually have run out of words to describe the final chapters. Of course, Lady Catherine is always self-righteous, and Darcy, well I'm very proud of Darcy. Just as Austen wrote Darcy as a person who could stand up to his aunt and claim his happiness in Elizabeth, the very fact that you stayed true to his character makes it a story worth reading. Anyhow, a happy ending in which I am glad to have been blessed with. A sad week for me, but at least, your story is something that gives light on a mournful week. With this kind of work, I look forward to your future endeavours!