|Reviews for Samus: Dinosaur Hunter|
| dullahan21 8/3/12 . chapter 9
I love this. I'm fairly new to Metroid, so I'm not sure how well you wrote out Samus's character, but I'm familiar with Turok, and all of its characters are true to the games. The pace is going well, too, not too quick or too slow. Keep up the good work.
| Guest 7/1/12 . chapter 9
Samus can dematerialize her gun at will. It is indeed part of her suit, but it can be willingly turned into energy and be called upon whenever it is needed. I guess you just wanted to show her off without her suit but it's just very strange-she's barely known them for long enough and she's already told them about her past, her weaponry, AND she takes her suit off.
Also, not sure if it was the last chapter but she mentioned whether she'd meet Adam-he's been dead for a while by the time she gets the dark weapons and you mentioned she had those already.
Besides that, everything's good. Looking forward to the next chapter.
| Guest 7/1/12 . chapter 6
Why would Samus tell her life story to random strangers when even some people in the Galactic Federation are unaware of it? This chapter feels rushed. All this info should have been given later(if at all), perhaps after some more bonding between the characters. Samus rarely talks in the latter years of her career since she's turned into more of a loner. Besides the thing with Samus talking to them as if she has known them for decades, this is a pretty good story. Keep it up