Oh, this was good! Finally, some insight into just who Chocolat really is.

And it was quite moving too. The last line fitted the mood beautifully.

Well done! _

Oooh. Lovely. I love the Satine-Chocolat relationship, and this story gave it the best background I've seen yet. It was bittersweet and beautiful. I adored it. :)

Thats so sad ! but it was excellent !

Satine 16 X

I love FLB.

I really liked that. Especially how Jean was Chocolat. I completely did not get that until they said it. :) I love how you tied in that tiny part of the movie when he hit the Duke. I've always wondered about that.

That was excellent...I really loved it, i did not expect Jean to be Chocolat at all...magnifique!