Story seems really good im pretty hooked can't wait for the next chapter good work so far

Update soon please! I love this story... though I feel kind of sad that Dutch and Benny are gone ...

This is a great idea! I hope to see an update sometime!

This is quite an outlandish senario, but your sense of character and dialogue is excellent. Revy certainly would be stressed in this situation, some Rock/Revy feelings developing in the future would be really good.

I'll admit from the start I was skeptical of the original idea, however you proved to do a very good job of making it work, and colorful at that. The original characters kept their original characteristics and tendencies while adapting to a new environment. The story line is intriguing, even without any shooting scenes. If I had to offer any suggestion to the story it might be an antagonist against the group or perhaps a danger to the Prime Minister's family. Chang would be my prime candidate for that, on a lesser note it could be Roberta.

Either way, keep writing like this and I'll definitely keep reading.

I hope to God you make another chapter. This is just too good to read!

I don't know what you're thinking not continuing this. This is a great Lagoon fic, amazing! Great story line and the characters are dead on, you've got to keep writing!

Cool story! I love Black Lagoon; and I love the way you write Rock and Revy. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Rhia x

I'm just gonna keep this short and sweet (sorry, but I'm not the type of reviewer who looks into spelling, grammar etc) I really, really like this story! Revy x Rock has been kinda slow recently so I'm glad you've put this up and I hope you update soon _

As for the believability of it... I honestly don't see the problem, as long as the characters are in charecter and nothing overly drastic happens like aliens, alls good in my books.

not bad at all but why would some organization do that to roanapur most governments wouldn't care fact is they would roanapur denizens convenient also would not use military forces to combat crime unless the situation was very out of control and required military intervention like mass riots. organized crime does not account for military intervention the one that proposed that bill is not only politically powerful but also fanatical.

if that bill is passed the countries you mention become police states like nazi germany or the soviet union.

still good work

Nice chapter again. Encounter with the whole survivors went the way I thought it would, good job there. For Revy she wented her anger quite great, should have known she would do that.

ROck's brother can't but help to wonder what he is up to and what he plans. Now thou I wonder what Revy would have done if Rock would ahve said i stay because I love you, seriously wonder what Revy would have done then.

So Balalaika and Chang were KIA or atleast MIA. Wonder what happens now thou with survivors of Roanapur together things should be blody, hehehehe states wont be the same after they are throu.

Hoping to see you soon.

So its said that Balalika and Chang has gotten KIA in Roanapur and now Rock needs to be on guard and start...scheming and planning things while Revy can be...her usual self...

The chapter was a bit short but still great...

OH HO! Revy is about to get some relief and the Terrible Trio is a coming to town! Can gun smoke and the ring of steel blades be far behind?

Just finished reading this story and i gotta say I love it. Nicely done with everything so far. And why do I get feeling that whoever is after prime minister's son is also the one who attacked Roanpur. Should be intresting to see what happens wehn Rock and Revy meet old friends for some reason I hope that Revy will be forth guard. The way Rock and Revy act with everyone in this is great. How Rock's relationship with his brother also goes from here should be good.

Really looking forward how this goes on from here.

Rock and his relation to his bro seems very stiff but it only looks like he has trouble only with his strict parents.

So last Chang's usual people have survived and all that remains is what must have happened to Balalaika,Chang and that false nun Eda (being a CIA operative must have escaped).

The fic just got more interesting...