|Reviews for The Tail of Love|
| Sesquipedalia 1/1/13 . chapter 10
Need an alarm clock in prehistoric times? No matter, Ali's annoying enough!
Rhett's a weird character. It's like everyone but me knows him, like he's had character development I don't know about. I don't know if he really thinks he and Ali are together, or is deceiving Littlefoot. Well, I guess I'm about to find out...
I love how no one's boring or two-dimensional, even the side characters! You've done a really good job integrating not only the characters but the reader into the dinosaur society. None of the explanations seem forced, no one is generic, and the OCs are believable and fall in step with the movie characters. You've got as many OCs as movie characters, but they work.
| Sesquipedalia 1/1/13 . chapter 9
Hey, here comes a love triangle, aaand there it goes. I admit, I did expect a chapter or so of repressed feelings. Not that that's bad, just unexpected. Can't wait to find out what happens with Ali!
| Sesquipedalia 1/1/13 . chapter 5
No, Janet, come back! You're the best OC ever! Noooooooo...
| Sesquipedalia 1/1/13 . chapter 4
Congratulations, you've just successfully avoided the Mary Sue Pitfall of Death and Destruction and jumped over the Incredibly Dull Gorge of Flat Characters. Finally, an OC that's good!
| Tamer 0f Light 7/15/12 . chapter 35
Great story :)
Sad that chomper died though :(
| Tamer 0f Light 7/8/12 . chapter 14
Love this story, please continue it :D
| WTF123 6/7/12 . chapter 35
So that's it. That's the end of the Tail of Love. Let me just say this: Words have never failed me so much as they are now at describing something. There's a million and one words that I can use to describe all 35 chapters of this. Thirty-five music tracks are playing in my mind now, one for each chapter. Some are nice, some are sinister, others are mysterious... but the last chapter in particular is just beautiful. I have no words to describe what a magnificent tale (Or should I say "tail") this has been.
Corration... it has been an honor sharing this particular review with you. And as we wrap up this final review of the final chapter... I would like to say that this story deserves to be archived. It needs to be shown to people. And so I will make it my personal responsibility to be sure that all of my friends see this, and show it to their friends as well. This whole thing is so much better than any piece of fanfiction I've ever seen since I joined here. And so, I will now wrap up this final review with this: Thank you... thank you so very much for making this. Thank you so much for conceiving it. Thank you so much for progressing through it, and making it such a thrilling ride. It has been an honor reading with you, and to end this:
"Some things you see with your eyes... others you see with your heart." -Littlefoot's Mother
| Gravidal The Dragon 6/7/12 . chapter 35
Great story, if I could I would reread it, it is that good.:)
| SpixPrime 6/7/12 . chapter 35
Perfect ending, Another great story has been successfully created an finished, Well done, I am glad Ali and Littlefoot finally found peace, Anyway I did not spot a single mistake anywhere, So well done on that too.
| WTF123 6/6/12 . chapter 34
"I love you..."
"... I know."
These lines from ESB rung in my head for the entire second half of this chapter. So it's finally happened. Littlefoot and Ali's kids are going to be born. If I could just see one more chapter to this, I would die a very happy person. Also, I've decided something: That this is officially the best piece of fanfiction ever written by a human being. I've seen some great fanfiction before, but those were absolutely nothing compared to this. This has beaten out every last LittlefootxAli fanfic on the web. This is light-years more than worthy of being published into an actual book, or even made into a film. I can already see this entire thing becoming the next LBT film. if there is one more chapter about their kids, and I finish it, I could die right there with no regrets. You have totally changed the way I look at Land Before Time fanfiction forever.
When I'm 90 years old, and I'm on my death bed, seconds from dying, this fanfiction will be in my head at that very moment. i will think about this whole story every day for the rest of my life, and this is more than worthy of being preserved by professionals. Going through every chapter was a joy, and every update left me wondering what would happen next. Just when it seemes that all hope was lost, something would happen that would completely change the situation, and that's apart of what makes a great story.
You my friend, are an absolutely exceptional and fantastic writer, and i don't know what I'd be like if this were never published. This entire story is like air: I can't live without it. In fact, any of my words are insignificant in describing how pleased I am as to how this whole thing turned out. Words fail me at describing you as a writer. So, Corration, I praise you as the best writer that has ever graced this world. Thank you for such a fantastic adventure that has spanned 35 chapters so far, and I would die happy if there was just one more. If this story goes on any longer, I would take any time I do or don't have to start from the beginning and go through this entire thing from first chapter to finish. Thank you.
| SpixPrime 6/5/12 . chapter 34
Ah another nice chapter. I kinda found it a bit amusing that they bashed Littlefoot over the head after he won. But things are cleared up now at least.
| Corration 6/5/12 . chapter 34
So that finishes "The Tail of Love". If there was any grammar mistakes along the way, which there were, I will fix them some time later or sooner. I don't know when, but I will fix them as best as I can. Thank you readers for reading this story. Some of you had followed it since December while others have just picked it up. I thank all of you. Sadly, it was my last LBT story. Nice way to finish, by making it the longest LBT story I have created. You know, this story was possible all because of the good reviews and PM message I got about "The Night Celebration", another LBT story. Well, anyways thank you, and check out my other stories if you haven't already, such as "The Night Celebration", "Survival", "The Legacy Lives On", and, (if you're into Sci-Fi, time travel, and magic) The Pentagon of Life. They are older though, so you'll see me growing in writing, typing.
So, peace and let the ideas flow and keep on going.
| WTF123 6/3/12 . chapter 33
He's got his memory back?... excuse me while I go start a New Millennium style party at Times Square... Something tells me this whole thing's wrapping up soon. Whether it is or isn't, this is one of those fanfics that just deserves to be archived at the Library of Congress. I'm dead serious, this can be like a famous fanfic that can be preserved over time.
| WTF123 6/2/12 . chapter 32
Oh boy, here we are. The climax of the greatest fanfic ever written, the fight to end all fights! The Battle of Heroes music is just echoing in my head as I write this. Come on, Littlefoot... You can do this! You can get your memory back! I know you can!
| WTF123 6/2/12 . chapter 31
I sure hope that Littlefoot can get his memory back. I'm still rooting for you, Littlefoot. You can do it! I know you can.