|Reviews for Momo the Battle Mage|
| Ohfortheloveofpete 12/24/12 . chapter 1
It'd be funny if they visited Empryean since it's a land of technology rather than magic...
| Darkis Shadow 12/16/12 . chapter 1
Did you change Lim Lim to an Elementalist to fit the story? Lim Lim is a battle mage in the game that knows Fire Pillar. I'm sure you know this already though. Nice story though
| Nutrire 9/22/12 . chapter 1
Cute and adorable, wished it was longer. -Sad Face-lo
| Dzuljeta 4/26/12 . chapter 1
The huge paragraphs did seem frightening at first.
But I enjoy your story so far.
| Cheyla 4/19/12 . chapter 1
You have a great start so far. The only thing that I can recommend doing is perhaps start a new paragraph every time someone different starts to talk. It may just be a personal preference but I think it makes things easier to read and prevents paragraphs from becoming too long.
| Perfect Beauty 4/11/12 . chapter 1
I must admit I know little to no information about your fandom, sorry. But, I think this story flows very smoothly. Good job.
| ChibiSoulReader 4/11/12 . chapter 1
Although I have little knowledge of this fandom, The story is well written and it flowed smoothly. In other words, I liked this story and they ending was cute
| Akela Victoire 4/11/12 . chapter 1
Hey there David! I'm here with the promised review from our little group! :D
I did enjoy this piece. I am not familiar with this fandom at all but it was a good read. I love a good fight scene and yours here wasn't bad at all!
I hope you continue for the sake of the readers in this fandom!
| Koolkatx 2/15/12 . chapter 1
I think giving Lim Lim a sis is really cute(maybe now the next time I go there she won't blast my character into oblivion! :D) Anywho, this was well written, good job. :3