Very good story so far! I watched that movie yesterday and I love it!

This is wonderfully written! I love the dialogue and the interactions between Honest John and Gideon, Gideon's inner thoughts, and the scene with the Coachman. I hope you continue.

It's really good! Please continue!

Omg! I love this! You've done an amazing job so far! Keep up the good work ;) and please, please, pleasseee continue!

p.s. HJ is my favorite character in Pinocchio! 3

I laughed when Gideon hit Honest John on the head with his club XD

Great writing :) Keep on writing this, please

Wow, I've never even considered this guys point of view. I didn't even know his name! It's interesting the way Giddy seems to be the one with all the brains. I love this and can't wait for more!