|Reviews for Skies of Arcadia: Dark Moon|
| Wild-Roze 12/13/11 . chapter 1
Well, its a rather brief start. You need to work on your style of writing a little. Some of it doesnt seem to flow well. always read over it before positng it, to see if it all looks OK, and sounds as it should. Other than that, it seems pretty interesting. I like your idea, its different.
I look forward to reading more.