Positively, absolutely, depressingly lovely.

GAH!... SO SAD!... But brilliantly well written.

oh wow, this was much, much more angsty/depressing than i was expecting. still beautiful and really well written though.

This made me cry... It was beautifully written and so amazing, but so so sad. It's given me a whole new perspective on Lily. I really loved this though :)

Brilliantly done. The writing was descriptive and pretty, but not so much so that it got in the way of the narrative. You moved the story along in an easy to follow way. It made me sad, but it made me think. Thank you. :)

You're an excellent, excellent writer. I nearly cried on this one and I hardly cry... Over stories, anyway. Very good job. ;)

I'm so sorry it has taken me this long to read this, but I absolutely love it. I think you've done such a beautiful job building the characters, and your descriptions are so perfect, and Albus...oohhh Albus...is such a brilliant older brother. Lily breaks my heart and Teddy is so tragic and the ending is so so sad but also so suitable. I adore it.

This was really great, and extremely depressing at the end. I loved the voices though, and the whole idea/concept. I think this might be your best!

Love me, xoxo (I'm suppose to be working on social studies)

.hilarius. i love lilys madness ways and how it dident end happy. good job!

it is really sad, stupid Teddy, he could have saved her. she heard voices in her head, right? it had a poetic quality to it i loved. good hob.

wow... that was an interesting idea... very sad. I did not think that I would like the pairing, but I actually really did... I can see them together.

*whistles* deeeeepressing... but good.