I think you should make it a story.

Love it. It's kinda confusing but I'd really like to see this as a story

This hot has the amazing potential to become a brilliant story. I really do hope that you turn it into one. It is obvious that Jake is a wolf and has imprinted on her. Then in what time-line does this plot belong to? Or is it completely alternate universe?

Oh! Jacob's sisters' names are Rachel and Rebecca, Paul has imprinted on Rachel.

Really good work. Keep up!

Hey, great story! Please, write it down. I want to know everything about this girl.