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| Chiban-chan 2005-11-01 ch 6, | abusenice one! i love it! although...i think highschool daydreams was better! but i love this one anyway! |
| KageOkami-Kogo 2005-09-11 ch 6, | abuseExcellent fic! Write a sequel! LOL keep it up!! |
| miz-lou 2005-01-24 ch 5, | abusePS>I LOVED the ending. Great use of literary symbolism. Heero always had the gun at her, she was always the one holding on, now it is the other way around, Relena has the gun and Heero is holding on. Relena threw away everything, EVERYTHING so that she could be true to herself, and she is strong enough to do it on her own, but Heero, though strong on the battlefield, when it comes to his emotions, he needs help. Emotions and a soldier in Heero are seen as separate, emotions hindering the soldier in him. Relena finds a way to use his soldier instinct to allow Heero to understand his feelings on his own. He no longer has to be a soldier, he no longer wants to be a soldier, but he sees himself as a victim of his circumstances (pretty deep for someone who has such a shaky, unknown past). He is a soldier becuase he was TOLD to be a soldier. He has to protect Relena becuase he had said he would. He does everything for everyone but himself, though his military actions...Relena takes those military actions and shows him that it is ok to be true to HIMSELF for once. I always knew she had potential *wink* GREAT JOB!! |
| miz-lou 2005-01-24 ch 6, | abuseThat's it, I'm forever a fan. *DeVoTeD* I think this is the way GW SHOULD have ended! You really kept true to the characters-Heero would be unsure, Relena would get tired of waiting, she is human after all-strong, but human. I love how it seems all will work out perfectly in the third chapter, but in order to really appreciate how much they mean to each other (as if war at the age of 15 and the Eve Wars weren't enough), they needed to go through these trials you present, only this time with baka Heero acknowledging his feelings-and with the help of friends of course! Kudos! Take a bow, *slap on the back*, you desearve it! miz_lou |
| La La La Anime Fan 2004-11-11 ch 6, | abuseah! it was soo good until the ending. you killed it with the ending!geez...great story bad ending...betta not end highschool like that...sheesh that ending...the rest was good... “Screw you. |
| Sarah. 2004-09-05 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis so so damn ROMANTIC than the last chapter! I love this chapter! See ya. |
| paladin2007 2004-02-03 ch 6, | abuseWow. That is the saddest and happiest story I have ever read. And I thought she was really gonna kill him *bangs forehead on wall* Stupid, Stupid, Stupid! *turns back to author* Oh well. This was great. Nice Fic! See ya! |
| paladin2007 2004-02-03 ch 4, | abuseThis has to be the sadest story I've ever read. Just had to say that before I got on to the next chapter. Very nice. Bye. |
| Sailorstephanie 2003-11-04 ch 1, | abuseHello again. I just wanted to say that this is very good and that your work is well constructed. You are my fav. fanfiction auther. I hope you see my stuff soon. bye ^_^ |
| Chixydee 2003-06-14 ch 6, | abuseI loved it, *bows before your great ness*.It was cool, aand kinda angsty. |
| BloodIce 2003-06-06 ch 6, | abuseYAY! They finally got together! Not the way I expected, but still GREAT! Heero and Relena are so cute together! I loved the story! Keep writing! |
| Relish Yuy 2003-05-30 ch 6, | abuseyou're right.. some of us are disappointed.. c'mon, I know you can to better! I love your writing, but that ending was really weak and unrealistic.. |
| Morrighan of Crimson and Sa... 2003-05-30 ch 6, | abuseThat was cute! What a nice way to end the angsty part of the fic!! Great job!! ~~Morrighan (formerly Meio-chan) |
| Stephanie 2003-05-03 ch 6, anon. | abuseAW that was a sweet ending! I kinda wish it was a little longer, but a good ending all the same ^_^! |
| Marli8907 2003-05-01 ch 6, | abuseThat was great! When u said "the death of Heero Yuy" i'm like "she's gonna kill him off!?!" But I was happy w/ the end. Wish there had been mor (i loved this fic), but i'm very happy w/ it! |