Excellent. This story, in my opinion, captures the personalitys of the characters perfectly.

Oh, my stars! This is totally my favorite EdxWinry story BY FAR, and trust me, I've read a lot of them already! Nobody catched their character as good as you did, and that's something to feel really proud about. Not only is this freakishly in character, but it's also so very romantic, too. I love EdxWinry, and your story did them 100% justice! Ed, you lucky buzzard, you. Lol! Nice job, my friend. Please continue to write stories to save this website from being anymore crappy. Believe me, you can't find much stories like yours. You have great talent, indeed! _.

Nice little story, just the right amount of humor and sexyness ;D

I just love this story- and sweet Ed! *giggle* I hope you continue to write beautiful stories.

So cute :3 Ed and Winry really are sweet together :D

I already commented on this LJ, but I shall review as well.

AHHHH I LOVED THIS. I can imagine Ed and Winry being awkward and a bit unknowing their first time, so reading this was hilarious/adorable (meaning I 'lol'ed' and/or 'aww'ed' whilst reading xD)

Kudos to you, RoseMuse.

aww this was so cute! oh edo! ur so awkward!