This is a really good story, I'm surprised you hate it... but then again, maybe the story isn't turning out the way you want it or maybe you got bored of it or something. Anyways...

You simply must hurry and do more heheh ) (Huggles)

*bows low to Akira* I am stunned, m'dear. How can you say your story is bad when it is so obviously good? I may dilike Quistis, but you made her actually seem human. Please don't rewrite the entire story, it is too good thus far for you to do so. Please continue your story.

This is such a wonderful fic! I've read it someplace in the net and I've long wanted to ask permission to use it for the Quiefer fic archive I'd be making...

Good thing I found it here, ne?

Keep up the good work!

Really, really good! Pwetty please post more! Very well written and with a great plot!

sup? Like the story. Do you write FF9 stuff?

Please MORE

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Dammit! I need more of this stuff! oh wait a minute. My exams are in 2 weeks, I shouldn't even be here...heez..

Well, hmm, where do I start? At the beginning, presumably. Very good concept you have here; I'm impressed. The only thing I think it could use is a bit of smoothing down.. it needs easier transitioning between actions and descriptive passages. Other than that, I love it! It's great! Keep up the good work.

And as usual another Excellent Chapter Akira,

there are some minor spelling errors in it but it's very good :)

keep going there.

Next Chapter! I love this story! _ continue!

oh no ! not another cliff hanger ! geesh ! fanfiction net seems to be full of them nowadays ! i am glad that you are in a artistic mood coz i don't know how long i can wait to find out what happened !

Kewl! Its getting good! Hurry up with the next chapter!

I love it! please write more soon

It's Great to see your Story updated Akira :)

I Love your story :)