Aww, this was done so well! I loved every bit of it. Poor Snape. APoor all of them. I wish you'd continue! So well-written!

Amazing.

Hi, that's nice background info, and your characters are well analysed, too.

Soo.. Mum-Potter isn't always too happy with her hot-tempered offspring-who'd have thought?

I'm lost with the exact reason why Sirius is ill. Does he have trouble with his Animagus-form or is it something else?

Dumbledore's reasons are as weak as ever, sadly fitting.

You inserted your story twice, btw.. Is it for a comparison or is it twice the exactly same text?