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ObsessedwithBirds 12/12/11 . chapter 2
"Buckskin's and Albino's"

Wrong use of the apostrophe.

Still, very good.
ObsessedwithBirds 12/12/11 . chapter 1
I like the fact that the horses might be metaphors.

Excellent.
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