That was beautiful! it really caught the interaction I enjoy so much between those two :3

This is so incredible...please never read my stories. They sound like crap compared to yours. Though this was so much more...implied than straight out D/Leon as I was assured it was.

-Rea

I'm in love with the imagery! Great work!

: ) Totally IC for the count...Ooh, I just love this series!

Kawai!

Oh-ho man! This was good! Keep writing dude! luv ya

Yuki Haitani_

_ Yummy.

That's gorgeous

You make great use of metaphor and simile throughout, bringing it alive. I love your charactersation of D especially - and Leon, of course. You've caught the mysticism of D's shop really well.

Love it!

M...tension. Delightful! Says a lot in a fairly short amount of time, which is difficult to do. Thank you for sharing it!

Ahh...I love how D teases. Just a matter of time before Leon is tamed. I think you've captured perfectly Leon's whole "drop by in time for tea" attitude here, including the crappy excuses for talking/staying/leaving.

YAY! So purty!

omg! that was so good! you are a really talented writer. keep up the good work.

gotta love DxLeon!

Wonderful! This is really great...a sequel, I insist! The writing style is intriquing and very descriptive...exactly how I like it. Good job!

Feathered Wings

Oh. WOW. That was good! So delicate, so in character, so perfect, so very, VERY "Pet Shop of Horrors" at its finest! I sincerely hope the writer of this wonderful piece knows how grand it is! I've never read anything in this genre quite like it at all and am glad that it is the last piece I'll read before Christmas. Now it'll linger longer in my memory and that makes me smile!

Beautifully written, some truly poetic phrasing.