I really really like this :) good job!

That is so cute!

*squee* YAY, I FOUND ONE! Geez, even before Alai kissed Ender, I wanted them to end up together. xD; Of course, as accepting of homosexuality as Marin School of the Arts and Technology is, it's still a school book. *sigh* But YAY Thank you! n_n I enjoyed reading this very much,

This is seriously good. You also made me download the song. .

You're really a good writer, I liked it very much ;) keep on writing!

I must also say that I once thought that Alai loved Ender. Yes, I know, in the book, they're just friends ( such a beautiful friendship...) but now I see I wasn't the only one to think that...

I'm sorry if I made mistakes, but I'm French. I can read English, but write...well, that's more difficult :(

I see I'm not the only one who read a little too much into that kiss. ;P

Nice fic.

Well..um..interesting of course. I can't decide though, if I really love this fic. I never really portrayed Alai as that type. Ahh well...
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Cute fic _ I remember thinking of them as a possible couple when I read the kiss too, glad I'm not the only one. I wonder what Ender's reaction would be though?

I have to say that I think this is very well written. I fact, this story is about the best written thing I have seen on . However, why would anyone write Ender/Alai slash? I have no problem with gay pairs. I can ignore that fact that they are both about 12 years old, but I've read Ender's Game maybe 7 or 8 times, and I have yet to see Ender and Alai's romantic relationship! The whole premisis is OC which I would think would go against the whole point to writing fanfiction: everything about the story has already been created - setting, characters, plot. I appreciate that fact that you have read the book and obviosly liked it, but I think you missed the point of the book.

Please don't take this personally. I know you have the right to write whatever you want, and I know no one is forcing me to read it, but you're such a good writer! Please use your talent for good, not evil!

At least it wasn't a lemon ;-P

Oh, SO cute. I loved it. Yeah, i guess i agree with ya- Alai is the only one for Ender.

Very nicely written!

aw sweet! loved the sequel also! LOL

Wow, that was really sweet and good!

SEQUAL! I wanna know what Ender thinks! :)

this is the cutest thing :) while reading 'ender's game' i always thought of alai/ender, and the fact that you wrote a fic about it makes me so happy! you rock my socks. -quimby

Oh, I was sooo happy when I found an Ender/Alai fic! :D Yaay! I totally saw the little hints that could have been interpreted into slash between the two. This was cute little fic, and I love the idea more than anything. _