THANK YOO! It was so sad, especially the last part, bad I loved it, gurl! :)

Short - packed with stuff though - and very poignant.

Really liked the clash of conscious/sub-conscious for both of them.

Well done!

This was so sweet, and yet so sad. Great job!

Oh, dear D:

How do you make a 300-word fic so sad? Haha.

It's kinda sad, how she made her decision. The part about his not whispering Kelly's name in his sleep anymore; that broke my heart.

I wish things had turned out better for them.

It's a good story :)

Soph

P.S. Livvy! I love Livvy. I miss Livvy :(

Very insightful. I wonder how much she might've regretted sticking to her 'plan' in the end.

Sue