Reviews for Logical Discontinuity
your death's best friend 1/10/13 . chapter 3
Lols everywhere
Restrained.Freedom 10/3/12 . chapter 9
Oh Shitt! What did he just do?...
I can't wait to find out... XDDD
Restrained.Freedom 9/22/12 . chapter 8
Man...
That was cold... killing Brom like that.
I swear, I didn't know whether to laugh or cry out in anger.
Great job.
I think what I like most is the satirical humor laced all through this piece.
XDD
Unique .F 8/31/12 . chapter 7
God, I'm in tears...I'm so simply amused...
Unique .F 8/31/12 . chapter 6
Riders' Grand Library Of Pornography...This is hilarious.
Unique .F 8/31/12 . chapter 2
I've never read the fourth book of the Inheritance Cycle, so I'm just going to follow fanfic writers' tradition by completely ignoring everything that happens in it. Don't worry! I own and have read all the other three books, so everything should be at least 75% fine.

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Even though she was getting dizzy with his spastic thrashing,

I AGREE WITH YOU! SAPHIRA HAS NO PERSONALITY IN THE BOOKS OTHER THAN SHE'S BLUE! HALELUJAH!
Restrained.Freedom 8/31/12 . chapter 7
You are too funny...
I swear I laughed till tears ran down my face.
ShadowWolf203027 8/31/12 . chapter 7
Lol love this. Keep it up.
Kazeodori 7/27/12 . chapter 6
Riders' Grand Library Of Por... Well, that could be interesting. And poor Eragon. He should get some thing to put in the holes so they heal right :P
Gingyz 7/27/12 . chapter 6
this is great
Restrained.Freedom 7/27/12 . chapter 6
This would have to be... like... Groundhog decade...
XDDD LMAO
Kazeodori 7/11/12 . chapter 5
I really like this side of Saphira. It's quite a lot like I'd imagined she'd be around Glaedr, almost flirty, but more like a puppy trying to get attention.
This is well written, coherent, and highly amusing. I'm looking forward to reading more!
The only complaint I have is that the chapters are so short. And that I am a bulb of garlic.
Restrained.Freedom 7/7/12 . chapter 5
Falling into holes of vampire moles?...
Let's see... pretend to be a bulb of garlic, or... "Lick the mole?"
LMAO...
Don't listen to her Eragon... {not this time anyways...} XDDD
Restrained.Freedom 1/12/12 . chapter 1
The chapters have sort of switched numbers just a bit,

0.o

Anyways, this is for the chapter of exploding ra'zac exploration...

I really adore the cunning of the mind of a baby dragon. I just don't know what else I can say. She is brilliant.
NormalityIsNonexistent 1/4/12 . chapter 4
She should become queen of Alageasia.
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