This whole story was cute. kind of predictable and it kind of lacked details. But the things with the details I shouldn't be saying, because I'm not all that good with details. But still, it was a bit predictable I kind of knew what was going to happen a lot of the time. But I'm okay with that. This was still a good story. Good job. keep practicing and writing and you'll do well. I liked this. :)

Hi!

I liked the beggining of this story so much!

I can't wait for you to continue.

And I've been to NY once, it really is the best place ever!

Bye