Amazing! How much work you probably put into it, and it turned out great. I never imagined an episode of DBZ could be turned into a poem. Just magnificent ! _

Very nicely done, it requires more skills to write a poem than actual prose.

The action and description look more lofty when put on lyrics and I really hope you'll do the same with other episodes as well.

Nice job!

Awesome job! One can easily picture Goku'a arrival at Kame House all the way to Goku and Piccolo's battle with Raditz with this. Again AWESOME job!

Thats really good :)

Coofis,

I am mostly delighted to have read your Dragon Ball Z poem, I loved it so much I read it aloud.

I could never imagine such a perfect piece, it's truly incredible what you were able to achieve, and it's very clear that you are very talented with words, you made the most difficult sentences rhyme effortlessly.

I'm a big fan of Dragon Ball Z, and I'm also a really big fan of poetry. Imagine my smile when I see this under the new submissions. I have subscribed to you, your stories, and i have added you to my favourites.

I definitely look forward to more of your poems on DBZ or any other subject.

You are AWESOME.

I'll share this with my brother, I'm sure he will love it just as much as I do :)