"Cassandra wouldn't understand that linear is highly overrated and the next step is down and in and a little over, a bit sharp, slightly minty, second scar to the right, half asleep, two thirds awake and a small infinity short of forever". The. Best. Line. EVER! u

I love your writing style. You don't accidentally get out of character by using too much dialogue and you manage to make Arthur believably interesting and romantic without straying from his movie image. Great job

That was surprisingly enjoyable :)

Awww, that was nice.