Poor, dear Cameron; I pray someday he'll meet people who care for his opinion. This was very well executed, and you captured the nature of Sloane and Ferris's relationship perfectly.

I had a feeling that Cameron was jealous of Ferris. You wrote his character perfectly...I could instantly picture him secretly pining away for Sloane, but never having the courage to tell her. That's the exact kind of guy he is. Great job!

This is a wonderful idea and you did a great job of expressing it.

I love this! Totally awesome story and you write in Cameron's thoughts so well. I never pictured him liking Sloan for more than a friend. Great job and very enjoyable reading!

"Swallowing the memory of that day and those of a thousand chances lost, Cameron turned around from where he stood on Sloane's doorstep. He kicked a soda can in frustration as he walked home in the direction of the dying Chicago sun."

Aaaw...I could picture it too, so well written it was :-) Great job!

Totally something Cameron would do. Good story! :)

This was really good. I always kinda wondered about that, since Sloane didn't really seem to particularly LIKE Ferris...of course, she never seemed to harbor any feelings for Cameron either...but still.