That's kinda sad that they don't act like a real couple should but I guess it would be stressfull too with their gifted daughter.

Poor Serenia, she just can't have a break can she?

Aww I've seen the movie before and I always thought that might had been something between the Captain and Mr. Arrow! So cute -

I really like this story! Plz update it soon!

-a random reader :)

i loved it! can't wait for more!

awwwwwwwwwwww i love the fight over Jim's name! lol hilarious can't wait for the next chapter... lol

I LOVE IT! please update! and i dont have any questions to ask

- Alice 3

i loved it! can't wait for more!

Please update! It so interesting!

Me:-is next to Amelia leaning over a map of the ship- Now, if we take the gunpowder and place it her, then get the laser guns and aim them here, we can easily-

Serina:-walks in, and wags finger- I told you to stop plotting to kill the crew!

Me, and Amelia:-groan and put the map away- Alright, sheesh.

Serina:-smiles and walks out-

Just loved this chapter! Still a bit hard getting used to, but its growing on me.

i read this on DA, ppretty good! Just abit hard to process still, IDK why.

:D:D:D:D:D:D

-looks cautiously at story in front of me- This, my friend, is your strangest, most mysterious work yet. I am very interested in what is to happen and in fact I have a Avatar the last airbender story in progress.

The old man scare's me somewhat...and now my wild imigenation is running wilde, changeing storys in my head and experimenting with the actual possibility of the avatar in Treasure Planet.

I await the next chapter.

I sound really weird right now don't I? This isn't my useual review style...Must be the chocolate rush I have just gained from a wonderful party...-shrug- Now I bid thee goodbye, thy friend. -pulls cape in front of me, a puff of smoke erupts from behind it, the cape drops, and I am replaced by a single black cat with amber eyes-