Love the correspondence with the game! Great pairing, too!

aww, no hot smex? damn.

That was an amazing story :) You write really well
I haven't ever thought of Henry and Vito together but you made me enjoy the pairing :D

i absolutely loved this! I am so glad I am not the only one who pictured Vito and Henry together! You should definitely add to this story. Your writing is fantastic.

It occured to me that I'd love to see a fanfic written about the game just as I was playing it yesterday. And this, this is a very lovely story indeed! I was glad that I'm not the only one crazy enough who imagines Vito in a fanfics.

It was amazing to read the descriprion of the house we can both picture very well, it was lovely to have the characters have their own feelings, thoughts and wishes.

I liked the plot idea as well and the last sentence ("like so many nights before") made me smile.

Thanks for writing this down and for sharing it, it made my day!