I must say...BEAUTIFUL! I love! _

Simply beautiful... You had me tearing not even half way through the story... _ Keep up the great work!

My gods was that beautiful...

nicely done. i wish there were more vampire princess miyu fics of this quality!

i think it is nice that it is short, kind of like a poem. and no quotation marks to interrupt it.

please write more!

Wow, thats beautiful. Excellent writing.

wow! beautifully written

Abosolutely brilliant. Loved the use of Bronte, very well written. Hope to see more of your work.

great, awsome, triffic, exsalint, and did i say great fanfic. plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz wright more.-_-;; sorry i'm in spaz mode. i really do love your fanfic and sorry if there is any miss spelled words. _;;

Sacred Ra. You really make amateurs such as myself look bad. Lol. I hope you add more. This is such a lovely fic.

u r write quite well

Oh man that ws beutiful. The best description of a really romance scene. Please write more of this I love it.

That was exceptional. I like it alot. Keep on writing.

Raven's Angel

This was the most beautiful thing i have read in a long, long time. You could feel the passion, desire and love that they felt for each other in every word. You are a wonderful writer and one day i hope someone will love me as much as Larva loves Miyu

Aww, I loved it.

This is greatly in character! I wonder how you did that! I don't find many fics where these two are so well shown... You really are good, you know that? Please, make this longer, k? I hope you make a second chapter to this and I would appreciate it if you were to send me an e-mail when you updated...

Love, Kiss and Cookie

Lady E