Reviews for Shades of Grey

Reviews For: Shades of Grey - Reviews: Page 1 of 32

Hairspray07fan 2008-06-20 ch 7,	abuseplease write more i loved it all and want to know more
Loxodonta-Magica 2008-03-21 ch 12,	abuseLovely contin uation of the series. I am going to the next one now. Well done, Brava! As far as criticism, I have none. I especially enjoyed how you developed the sexual tension between the characters witrhout there being any sex! That was pretty cool. It tkes a mature writer to do that and not feel the nned to include any graphic scenes. Thank you!
Mersedes 2008-03-06 ch 12,	abuseOh my. That was spectacular. Your story must be given some kind of award. How about The Most Perfect Harry Potter Fanfiction Story Written in the History of Fanfiction? Or how about The Author Who Could Emulate J.K. Rowling To The Extent to Which no Difference Could be Seen? That was perfect. Just perfect. I love the way you write.
Alma Gloriosa 2007-12-18 ch 12,	abuseOh my God. I'm not much of one for reviews and so most authors don't get them from me, but this is amazing. When I read the first story is was on a complete whim and I thought it was ... good but not great. Entertaining, certainly (I'm a sucker for a Harry who has lost his memory, or really a Harry who's vulnerable in any way), and overall a good plot with an interesting outcome with Lucius (I'm still curious where Severus went before returning to their room ... I thought that was going to have something to do with the Azkaban thing, until Fudge revealed his mark). Though, to be honest, I was getting a little bit annoyed at all the mystery. Then, I decide to read the sequel, and OH MY GOD! Seriously, it's not the longest fic out there, or perhaps even the best in terms of a truly developed style, but in terms of plot and meaning it is amazing. Do you write original fiction? Because out of all the fanfic authors out there, you're one of the few whose original stuff I would really, really love to read. Even some of the really popular authors (I don't want to mention any names) and one who has put a massive original work out there ... I just didn't get into it. But this story is so true to human life, so true to who we all are, that I am seriously amazed. All right, so I know it hasn't been revealed yet, but I've assumed ever since Severus's dream of Albus erasing his memory, that the papers Albus has are a letter from a future Severus (or Harry, but since the very end of this story, Severus), and that the horrible-looking Snape Harry and Draco saw in the corridor somehow ties into that. I can't quite make out the actual tie to the sickly-Snape ... I have ideas, but none that I want to think about at the moment ... but I'll definitely be reading on (damn you, I have so many other things I need to get done, but I can't stop reading!) though I somehow doubt it's all going to be resolved in what you have of the third and fourth stories. I know you haven't posted in forever, and I'm hoping that doesn't mean you've abandoned the stories (I def. wouldn't be one to talk, seeing as it's been about a year and a half since I last updated anything). I can wait ... but I don't think I can manage to not know how it ends, so if you have abandoned them, and you do somehow read this, can you just email and tell me how you were planning for the story to end? Yeah ... um, and this is like the longest review ever, but I just wanted you to know how much I absolutely adore you. And if you do have original work, totally get it published because I want to read it! Cheers, and here's to working on projects we haven't look at in forever!
passionfornight 2007-11-30 ch 12,	abuseThis was even better then the first story. I really enjoyed reading it and now Harry and Snape have managed to stop dancing around with each other. I have got to read the next story because there is something going on and I want to know what.
freekazoid101 2007-11-16 ch 12,	abuseWow. You really played with my emotions on this one. A lot. But I love where you went with it. (Please excuse my poor grammar.) I really love how you incorporated Draco, and I love all of his lines. They are perfect! That flirting scene was awesome. I really love this! Thank you for writing it!
freekazoid101 2007-11-02 ch 4,	abuseOk, I was totally about to commend you on the awesome and fun dialogue... until Severus went and became a very, very, mean bastard (I'm so upset I can't even formulate a sufficient insult). Good job, but still, this is going to hurt, I can tell.
Tulkawen 2007-09-10 ch 1,	abuseI enjoy reading your stories. They have a healthy balance of humour, dramma and suspence without taking it too far. Good job.
cckeimig 2007-09-01 ch 10,	abuseWow.
cckeimig 2007-09-01 ch 9,	abuseFINALLY! And so the Sev we saw in the hallway was a future escapee of Azkaban or something?
cckeimig 2007-09-01 ch 6,	abuseWell, I must say that was an ominous note upon which to end the chapter... (My initial reaction was simply 'Oh, hell!')
cckeimig 2007-09-01 ch 4,	abuseOh, OUCH!
cckeimig 2007-09-01 ch 1,	abuseLOL! Brilliant ending to the chapter!
swordbunny4486 2007-08-10 ch 12,	abusenice!
die666 2007-07-21 ch 12,	abuseI'm going to kill you...AFTER I read the other one. Then I'll probably hug you, while holding a knife in my hand.

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