 Lady Parcifal 3/4/03 . chapter 1this was absolutely fantastic!The Trance story you made up is exactly what I thought had happened. And it was so sweet, thank you for this.
And you should have rated this as humor as second one, you got the great line.
“Ah, Harper.” Dylan said, catching him before he could sign off.
“Yeah boss?” Harper asked, a little confused.
“You’ve got some lipstick on the corner of your mouth.”
I was laughing my head writing this was just great! |
 McGann's Girl 11/29/02 . chapter 1v. cute and V. funny ending. i enjoyed it! |
 D-fens 5/11/02 . chapter 1Great story, I loved it. Keep up the good work. |
 Jane Fairfax 5/8/02 . chapter 1Adorable! |
 Hebe 5/7/02 . chapter 1 This is a wonderful story; I enjoyed it! I am a big Harper and Trance fan. |
 MaryRose 5/7/02 . chapter 1That was cute. Funny ending. |
 julz 5/7/02 . chapter 1 wow, if englilsh is your second language, i would have never known if u hadnt told me, this was a really great story, please continue it. |
 Starman800 5/7/02 . chapter 1 Cool story, I liked it alot. |