This was utterly heart-rending and beautiful. I hate my stupid blurry monitor.

The moment of the kiss and Peter trying to bring himself back under containment... because there is no control of what he feels just a tenuous containment... my heart pounded and ached for them both.

Well done, bravo. This fic is what other fics want to be when they grow up!

I think this is your best. I miss them too and can't figure out why Joshua doesn't want them together. They are so... *sigh*.

Oh my goodness, this was so beautiful! I am in utter awe of you and this. It is an incredible piece, so much emotion, my goodness, my whole soul just feel hollow and raw. This really moved me and tore at my heart so badly. It is absolutely amazing and so tragic and freakishly fantastic. Seriously, I am just blown away. It is really incredible, you wrote something truly extraordinary. I am really, really impressed.

Mathilde

OMG...this is heartbreaking and so angsty. I love it! Great job but poor Peter and Olivia.

Now is Peter so upset/hurt because 1.)he's starting to have feelings for Amber!Olivia but feels guilty, and is therefore rejecting her, because he thinks he's abandoning our Olivia or 2.)he just desperately and absolutely misses HIS Olivia?

Once again, amazing job :D

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be my bff

let me love you forever

dying.

you

are

perfect.

this is a flawless fic.

crying

sobbing

tears are coming out of my nose.

this is beautiful

make moar

please

I wish you were her too

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I WISH YOU WERE HER TOO

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*DEAD*

WHY! WHY! WHY! WHY! I CAN'T TAKE IT! THIS IS TOO PAINFUL!

I love this so much.

You are an amazingly talented writer!

Okay oops sorry I kinda pressed the "send" button before I finished my review... :P

ANYWAY. This is one of the absolute best polivia stories I've read. Ever. It was so heartbreaking but so believable. I can actually see this happening on the show. In fact, I secretly hope it does xD

Keep up the great work. Seriously this fic is free of flaws. :')

YOURE KILLING ME. YOURE REAAAAAAAALLY KILLING ME.

Oh holy mother of God this is so painfully amazing and beautiful. So is your other P/O story. Your characterization is SO GOOD. I hope you write more Polivia fanfics because seriously this is one of the best stori

Why, though? And I'm asking this through my ugly sobs.

I mean, this is...I MEAN. What have you done to my feelings? This is so beautifully written and so them and oh GOD WHY? I think you've just taken everything I've been feeling/fearing about this timeline and put it into perfect, gorgeous, heartbreaking words, and now my heart is just broken ;_; I'm in total awe of you right now, and there's a sob fest going on right now because of your fic just so you know, fangirls are weeping.

So, I'm guessing, one story, you give me incredible hope, the next one, you crush them all...so next comes the hope again, right? Can you post it now? Please? (I'm not above begging).

Okay, maybe we're strangers, but I love you anyway. Keep them coming, MY HEART CAN TAKE IT (maybe).

*Elialys*

YOU ARE A MONSTER. A GLORIOUS, BEAUTIFUL MONSTER. This is probably the best fanfiction I've read in a VERY long time. The interpretation of their feelings, the vivid detail, the metaphoric descriptions... I could literally vomit over how many feelings I have because of this. Dear lord.

I applaude you in the greatest sense possible. You deserve all the awards, because this is just brilliant. You managed to make me feel simultaneously dead and painfully alive on the inside. You... wow. Just wow. I look forward to more things from you. For now, my heart is broken and also full of gorgeous words.

13 stars out of 2.

I just read both of your stories - very very well done!

this is so heartbreaking!

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.

I don't know what else to say. I know a lot of writers here - myself included - have tried to play on what's going on right now, because there is too much potential for angst and all, but this is just the most beautiful one yet.

I even choked up a little at the end.

I'm love with the way you write. I just finished your other fic (Broken) with tears in my eyes, and I was so happy when I saw this new one, OMG you are a gift for all the P/O fans

Thank you so much, never stops!