maybe spacing out your paragraphs (into smaller ones?) would make it a lot easier to read. its confusing...? but im waiting for an update! yay! hotohori! socool! :)

update

I don't get it?

Even though I'm a TamaXMiaka supporter, this fic is really good ! Plus I think Hotohori is such a poor thing (before he met Houki). Maybe it's a good thing that for once he actually can get Miaka !

Please continue it! I told you by chat yesterday how much i love this fic!

*hugs* Please come online! And thanks to be reviewing my fics! o

Wow again...

I *love* the way you write. You have a vivid, beautifully descriptive style that immediately draws me into the story.

You can't stop here...I have two theories as to what's happening in this passage, but I am not totally certain about either of them! **grins and shakes head**

Although I am rather partial to Tasuki/Miaka pairings, _I must say I *adore* Hotohori, and do not mind at all if he would finally be able to get the girl!

Wonderful writing...keep it up! :D:D

KittyLynne

No! Don't stop there!I order you to continue.

Maa! How can no one have reviewed this yet? The imagery is *gorgeous* - I can see everything playing out in my mind perfectly. This is really intriguing...do I sense a continuation, perhaps? I hope so! _

((Lauren-chan))