Wow this is really great!

You captured Ron and Hermione wonderfully please think about adding chapters 2 this

This is a really sweet story. Hermione's parents aren't amazingly interesting, but it's great that she cares about them so much. It's obvious they mean a lot to her!

Wiping their memories had to have been hard on her, and more so than she let on. I feel really bad for the girl.

But in the end, Ron is right; the year they missed was one that would have had them terrified for her safety and confused. It's probably better that they never know everything that happened.

Thanks for sharing this charming short story with us!

Cheers!

Such a sweet moment between two of my favorite fictional people. I love the way Ron tries to understand her, and the gentle way he treats her when he doesn't understand. Love this.

Ahhhhhh this was perfect :D

I'm not normally a fan of fanfiction dealing with the sad, aftermath of the war stuff, but this was spot on :)

This story was absolutely adorable! Ron and Hermione are definitely perfect for each other, and your story portrays that really well. It's nice to see Hermione as the one needing help from Ron and not the other way around. The dialogue you've used shows the characters quite nicely, too.

If I could suggest anything, it would be to use a little more description compared to dialogue. It'll flesh out your story even more. I already enjoyed this story, and having descriptive paragraphs would have made it resonate all the more with me.

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Keep writing :)

-HinataInuzuka

This is so good. I love Romione, and this is one of the first Romione fic about their marriage that I've actually enjoyed reading. It's not too mushy-gushy, and you captured their characters very well. (:

Thank you, I really liked the story. I'm glad you have Hermione and her parents in a good healthy relationship. So many seem to kill them, have them hate Hermione or just leave them out completly. I don't know how many birth stories I've read w/ all the Weasly clan and I'm saying "Where are her parents. Why would Teddy be there and not her mum and dad." Well thanks again.

Lovely, lovely fic. Hermione's memory charm on her parents is one of the darkest aspects of the series, I've always thought, and I would have loved to see further exploration of it in the books...I suppose it's Harry's story, though, and not Hermione's! But you explore it really beautifully here - I love that even though everything is fine, she can't help dwelling on the what-ifs. That seems very Hermione to me.

Also, loved the conversation about pyjamas, and the fake note from George.

Well done!

nawwww, they are lovely for each other!

Good Job!