Terrific. If only Jack weren't such an uptight twit, we might have had more of this!

Wow I love this. Currently writting a story called Dust In The Wind about Jill and Tirian's daughter. i love this couple there needs to more about them. More I say more. Great job and nice writing. It's going right into my favorites and you as my favorite authors.

Heh, definitely hawt and sweet... yet, it was more than that. It was lovely and poignant! I will admit that I feel a bit embarrassed about reading a Narnia fic like this (terribly sorry Jack!), but I would be lying if I said I didn't enjoy it. It was tasteful. Plus, Tirian/Jill intrigues me and that desperation in the last days of Narnia makes it even better! :)

Such a magnificent one shot! You're writing is wonderful! There is definitely not enough Jill/Tirian fics in the world. It's the only pairing that actually makes any sense since Jill is supposed to be 16 in The Last Battle.

Whoa. You don't often find well written M in Narnia fic. This is lovely and evocative and sensual without being explicit - written by and adult for an adult reader. You word choice is exceptional and this was very carefully crafted to give just enough. They are wonderful together here.

Gorgeous! Please write more about this couple. )