This was exactly what I needed to cheer me up after reading Fairy Tail's 286. It was fabulously hilarious and entertaining and fluffy and yummy and I'll just stop trying to find words to describe it now for I know I will never be able to find enough! Thank you for cheering me up with this. :D It was great. Really.

I hope to see something by you again! GrayLu fans are LUCKY to have you aboard our ship! o

I just want to say that of all the Gray/Lucy fanfics i've read this has to be my absolute favorite. It's just perfect in everyway: characterization, atmosphere, setting, everything. It's also probably one of the most beautifuly written fanfics i've ever read. It made a lasting impression on me, because, even though it's been months since I read it for the first time, I still think about it and remember it everyday.

Beautiful, beautiful work. I feel so blessed to have such a talented writer be one of my best online pals. :)

Belated happy birthday, Sech!

I love this story and I cant wait for the next chapter!

bahahahaha damn that was such a laugh! How can you make it so funny, I can NEVER write stuff like these and make it end well -.- Im only good with romance but not this kind of comedy-romance. Eh you have to teach me, please?

i am so delighted to see 'chaos theory' updated. this is definetely one of my fave stories from you...(even though i like all of them.)

i like this gray very much. your GRAYLU is sooo good. he's like cool, kind of a bully, and really, really sexy. d'aww. and lucy! it's always fun to see her squirm like that in front of gray!

you say that i flatter you but you are the one flattering me with your splendid writing skills. :)

the story's atmosphere, feelings, characters lines and everything is just so beautiful and i love it.

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now, okay. onto the chapter. ehem!

way to go gray! he made lucy ask him out! this is so good XD

this chapter's another work well done and i really really enjoyed reading it! they're just both so cute and sweet in their own ways, especially lucy! (see above)

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btw, i read something about 'chaos theory' in your profile and i can't help but think that the line you've been attaching below the title every chapter has something to do with that 'unconventional ending', and that it seems to be foreshadowing something tragic, but I HOPE that's just me. T_T

don't break our hearts please! because the recent FT chapter is already heartbreaking as it is. (boo, juvia, boo!)

also, i gotta be honest. i don't know whether i'm looking forward to your next update because i can't get enough of really good GRAYLU fanfics, or dread it because I know one of my favourites is gonna be finishing soon D:

still, i hope you update soon (and that it won't be as tragic) 3! whatever happens, i'm still an avid reader! :D

kind regards,

REALLY GOOD!

I can see the walls of friendship between them breaking down and turning into love. I hope Lucy pulls her head out of her ass and go for it! Why is it so hard for her to believe Gray likes her? She's pretty, she's sexy, she's overall nice, PLUS! She's "interesting". *winks* :D

ohmigod ohmigod ohmigod that was so so so sooo adorable :) and YES! the awaited realisation that lucy really likes gray is finally dawning! mwahaha :) its so funny reading about how her tongue seems to betray her every time! she doesn't even realize she's getting jealous of juvia! ahahaha!

thanks so much for updating (i was lmao-ing) haha and i decided to read the 2nd chapter again and fell about laughing all over again :)) anyway you're amazing and I'm already excited for the next chapter! till next time! :D

oh, before i forget, i was the one who asked about the "butt-monkey" so thank you for that! #enlightened

I swear, if you keep this up, Mashima himself is going to get jealous. For some reason your portrayal of these characters is so true to their real selves, almost as if you had Mashima next to you as you wrote this-or rather all your stories. Please continue as this is one of the few fics on here nowadays that I even take time to read. The rest are just implausible and too-OC stuff so this story is like a lone star in a night sky. :)

If I can persuade one person to read this story with this review, I'll feel like I don't owe you as much for the chance to read this. You're an amazing writer, and don't EVER believe anyone who /might/ say different.

I don't often review like this at all, but I just had to say that I've read a few of your stories over the last few days and you are a wonderful author. I deeply enjoy that you try to put new spins on plotlines, and keep it away from the hackneyed "twists". You as well do a beautiful job on working towards characters building feelings and understanding them, while a lot of authors these days simply toss the characters together - which is sad because character development and a good plot is what makes a story an unforgettable story.

I also remember reading that English is not your first language. While there is a little tense confusion with words in your stories, and sometimes punctuation mistakes (both of which can easily be edited), I must say your vocabulary is gorgeously vast.

When reading your stories they give me an aura of complete giddy-ness inside because everything is so lighthearted and hilariously sweet; I thank you for that. :) I cannot wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter and future stories.

Hey! It's chocolatesundae here. I changed my pen-name.

Anyway, why do I feel like... I should be prepared for something horrible to happen?

AHHH. PLEASE NO HORRIBLE THINGS.

Update soon! Thanks for the update! (:

This has got to be one of the cutest story ideas ever! And you write so well! I was hooked on every word and rooting for Lucy to just take the plunge the whole time AND/OR Gray to just jump her because we all know what he feels about her already from DD! I cannot wait to see where you take this story.

Your writing is practically perfect. I don't think I found one grammatical error. Not to mention Gray and Lucy seem exactly like they are in the manga/anime.

Please continue this soon! It's AMAZING so far!

Quite honestly one of the best fanfics I've ever read. You should write more! You make it so believable, as if Mashima came up with your plot for you.

Well done! Keep it up :)

I don't know what your thinking, but I love this chapter and this story! Please keep writing! 3

Cute chapter! I can't wait for more! and by the way, what did you mean by this being the last chapter of GraLu?

nice