Hi! Great chapter! I really enjoy your story. Kratos is just...beeing Kratos. ; Sorry...I just like Kratos. He's awesome! I really like Anna, I always thought it was unfair, that we never saw her. Namco is cruel. So, great story and I hope you update soon! :D

Ah the never ending question of Noish. I like Anna's spunk it contrasts so nicely with Krato's Krato-ness.

Haha, I wondered when Noishe will come in That's a cute chapter indeed !

This story is fun to read!

I hope you update soon :D

Hey! Yeah, this is a really good story you're writing. I hope you're updating soon. I like Anna! It's a shame that we never saw her. But anyway, keep writing!

(Sorry in advance for my English, but I'm French... And you know what we say, French are not really good at foreign languages xD)

Good chapter in my opinion. I love the fact that Anna is a kind of rebel(but can't help it). Her behavior and her way of speaking remind me of Lloyd, in a way.

But the mental torture is horrible, it's so... cruel ! (But it wouldn't be torture if it was not). I loved the dialogue at the end.

Your story looks interesting. So... Can't wait for the next chapter !

This is really good! Great start on this too. Some mispelled words, but I quickly forgot what they were. Other than that, its all great!