   LeahElizabeth 2/1/09 . chapter 1Really good so far. I plan to keep reading. |
| scorpion05 9/2/04 . chapter 6 wow, very dramatic story! poor mel!
i really like this pairing! they're cute togehter! |
| Eiflin 5/14/02 . chapter 6 very cute fic! keep up the good writing! |
| Reckless Nobleheart 'The Horse 5/14/02 . chapter 6 Aaaaaawwwwwwwwwww, no kiss? That woulda made it perfect! But please write more, I love how this is turning out. |
| Velvet12 5/13/02 . chapter 6 I think there should be an sequal. Its a good story... |
| BlueMoonDuchess 5/13/02 . chapter 6 Aw cute ending! |
| BlueMoonDuchess 5/10/02 . chapter 5 I compliment on you on getting these chapters out so fast, good job! |
| Velvet12 5/9/02 . chapter 4 this is a really good story. I can't wait for more! Keep up the good work! |
| BlueMoonDuchess 5/9/02 . chapter 4 Ooh I love brotherly stuff! This chapter was the best, (my opinion though). I really love how fast you get these out!
These are soo good! |
| Beautifully Misunderstood 5/9/02 . chapter 4 This is great :) |
| Eiflin 5/8/02 . chapter 3 *smiles* Dive and Mallory always make a nice couple. Good fic! keep those chapters coming at this speed and you'll have a lot of happy readers :D. |
| BlueMoonDuchess 5/8/02 . chapter 3 WOW! You got this chapter up real fast, congrats! Oh my gosh I can't wait for chapter four!
Pretty please with a cherry on top finish soon! |
| Death Lord La 5/7/02 . chapter 2 heh heh, this is cute so far _ Mal/Dive is my second favorite couple! i hope you continue |
| BlueMoonDuchess 5/7/02 . chapter 2 Ooh! Okay I'm here at chapter three now! Good! Can't wait for more! |
| BlueMoonDuchess 5/7/02 . chapter 1 Hey this is very good, I'm heading over to chapter 2 now! |
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