thats soo cool, i wonder what ur version of the future is? please send more soon, lovin it. i have so many questions but they should be answered in the next chapters. please keep going!

I like this story

so far so good but i need to read the rest of the story! So hope to read it soon.

I notice this hasn't been updated for quite a long time... are you still working on this? If you do - please update soon! It's an interesting and original story, and I'd so love to read more!

Cool! Can't wait to read more!

An interesting story so far...I look forward to reading your conclusion.

*snerks* Carl, Carl, Carl. Interesting. Moves a little fast...er, well, I dun know if I can say FAST, but it sorta...I dunno, 'skims' I suppose on the feel of the series (yeah, I'm REAL good at explaining things *rolls eyes*), but I like the plot. It has promise. More?

Please finish! This is great. I love Nick!

I knew what I was expecting, and read exactly what I expected, so, in short a good story, I enjoyed Jerry's confusion, and lack of action when he first spotted the Link/STG.

Very good; quite interesting. I look forward to reading more!

Great story, keep writing. very amusing. you got the charactors personalities correct. please continue.

Excellent story. Please keep updating. I can;t wait to read more. The plot is very good thus far.

Just when we thought we'd seen the last of Nick being Nick, here he is, back again and as reckless as ever. Yep! A definite Nick O'Malley moment to end Ch 1 on. Waiting for Ch 2...

btw, a cringingly apropos pun with the title.

Okay, I'm interested. More? Please. I really enjoyed this part. It's interesting and very well written. Thank you.