Awesome! Gawwww! Arelin!

That was adorable! I loved it! :)

i love this so much its so sweet

I liked the story, the plot was interesting; but it seemed a bit rushed. It was like you didn't know quite how to organize it and put it all together. It was pretty good and flowed well, but fast. All in all though, it was a good story. Please keep up the good work.

Ok! That "Falling in love." line was so mushy that I'll be squeeling for months! Great job! . 3