|Reviews for Without You|
| hope1iz 2/25/13 . chapter 3
Again- a very good chapter. Glad to see you back and writing again! I'm enjoying watching this mystery unfold.
Just curious- Tom seems very laid back and not curious about all the gadgetry he is encountering. I know he was used to seeing a lot of unusual things due to his association with the league- but I would have thought he would have had some type of response to the medical equipment, the tv,all the vehicles (and no horses), etc. Or am I misunderstanding something? (it seems like he got thrown forward in time somehow- hence my wondering how he can be so nonchalant about everything he is seeing.)
If I'm right and he did get knocked to the future- I'd kinda like to see his reaction to some of the things he would not have seen before. Especially since he always struck me as such a boyishly enthusiastic man. :)
| HuntressBiancadiAngelo 8/30/12 . chapter 2
Really good. Please update soon.
| beanie-art1 3/31/12 . chapter 2
Very interesting, can't wait to find out what happens mexts so update soon pretty please
| Sawyer Fan 3/30/12 . chapter 2
Great to see another chapter up!
Enjoyed the ending of the first section...Yay! Quatermain is back, and in grand fashion too...LOL.
Also enjoyed the second half with Sawyer. Poor thing, to have amnesia to boot! Got a kick out the part where the nurses wouldn't mind 'looking after his needs' so to speak...hehehehe.
Can't wait to see how Mr. Q reacts when he finds out Tom is missing!
Look forward to reading more!
| hope1iz 3/26/12 . chapter 2
I am so happy to see another chapter! I look forward to watching you have the league (and especially Tom's mentor/father-figure Alan) try and figure out what happened to Tom and get him back. :)
| Sawyer Fan 2/19/12 . chapter 1
Hey! This is great! First story and all. I thought it flowed great and has an intriging premise. Look forward to reading more!
Thanks for a great read!
| hope1iz 1/14/12 . chapter 1
Good start! Hope to see a second part soon. :)
| Estelwen Greenleaf 1/2/12 . chapter 1
Good story so far. I want to know what happens next! Write more!