I liked it a lot. Good choice of name for the father, it fits. :)

You wrote that really well :) So sad poor elf and jes :( i like how u showed linna's truedreams where elspeth grew older and linna saw her at different times in her journey. i loved it :)

Very well written. I liked how you made Elspeth's parents Talent's too. But, how do they know about other powers that they don't have...like empathy?

Anyway, I really liked it. Very touching.

Very cool...although I havent read the books that would enable me to understand what you're writing. But I can tell that the writing's good and I think I'll look up those books to read them. Keep Writing.

I like. I like. I like. I like. Can you please write some more Obernewtyn fics because there ain't enough of them around and I am in love with Rushton! Hint hint 'nudge, nudge'. pLease

*wipes away a tear* Very very good and very very sad.

Keep writing!

Katie

Hey sars, :)

Fabulous! :) Very sad tho, at the end.. :( Poor little Elf.. :(

i'm sorry for not reviewing sooner- i thought i already had!

at any rate, this is amazing. i really hadn't thought much about elf's parents, and this story really made them seem real to me. it was so sad! i think this is very likely what their final moments before the burning could have been like. very well done. :)

EEE! I loved it! You DO have a nice writing style, it really flowed.. Truedreams quite scary.

That was really good. I can't imagine what it'd be like to see your own death in a truedream...or the fates of your children, and be powerless to prevent it.