|Reviews for Preferred by Predators|
| wheather79 8/10/12 . chapter 1
So well-written and gutwrenching. The last line absolutely killed me. "Sleeplessness doesn't mean there are no nightmares. This nightmare is never-ending." I have a feeling I will be thinking about this for a while. xo
| FeatheredPhoenix 3/22/12 . chapter 1
Omg I loved it, cant you continue it?
| Eh Bien 3/2/12 . chapter 1
Wow, that is dark. Extremely well written and kind of fascinating, but disturbing. You've taken Twilight from juvenile fantasy all the way to genuine, mature horror story. Very well done.
| CindyWindy 1/5/12 . chapter 1
Very creative tie-in. So emotionally gripping! You have a sensitive spirit. Thank you for writing.
| Great Chemistry 1/1/12 . chapter 1
I actually put off reading this until I knew I would have plenty of time. Skimming from a cellphone screen would not do.
The hopelessness was crippling to read. I am always impressed with how you can do that to me. You made her emotions and actions seem so *right* it's scary. I'm still in shock.
Thank you writing and sharing this. It has a well deserved place in the contest.
| vampgirl138 12/30/11 . chapter 1
Whew! What an intense beginning.
| Aleeab4u 12/23/11 . chapter 1
This packs such a punch. Absolutely gut wrenching and raw. I loved every word even as I curled in around my too sensitive nerves in a vain effort to protect myself. And it was in vain. You ripped out my heart. Its bleeding at your feet. I'll come and get it back later...when I stop crying.
| Stoney Angel 12/20/11 . chapter 1
Another heartbreaker! Really well done - I loved the twist with Bella going to Volterra and still not getting what she wanted. Congratulations.
| SubtlePen 12/20/11 . chapter 1
good god, that was powerful. i dont want to thank you for this story. i want to embrace you, and shoo away all the spiders and - all the little girls? i want to raise them UP.
| GothicTemptress 12/19/11 . chapter 1
I wept when I read this. So well done! Congratulations Solareclipses!
| Sea4Me 12/19/11 . chapter 1
Wow, very powerful and very well done. You're sensitive to matters many wouldn't even stop to consider. You might want to share this with appropriate groups, blogs.
| Lady Dragona 12/19/11 . chapter 1
An amazing story of a person who needed an out and instead found a living nightmare.
| aanvicullen17 12/18/11 . chapter 1
wow...no words for this one...the vampires seemed so real! extremely well written! couldn't stop reading...
| Feisty Y. Beden 12/18/11 . chapter 1
This story absolutely gutted me and was the only one out of 60 that made me well up with tears. So well done. Thank you for sharing.
| Rasa.Ra 12/17/11 . chapter 1
Amazing writing.. Heartbreaking and devastating, but so real.. Even vampires seemed too real..