Great creative story!

Good epic with lots of action and, hurt Steve (a little sadistic of me but oh well...), Mike and Steve banter,...all in all I enjoyed reading this from start to finish!

Ouch for Steve! I hope he's not too badly hurt from the ordeal. And to think he wanted to be taken home instead of driven to the hospital! So typically him LOL.

OMG what a cliff hanger!

An action packed chapter! What a thrill ride this is turning out to be.

I sense a showdown is on the way and Steve is right in the thick of it! Good writing!

This is getting intense with Steve in the thick of it and possibly out of range for back up and then Mike finding the bodies!

Great build up on the case and the tension for the undercovers!

And the plot thickens with more suspects, witnesses and evidence piling up not to mention more dangers for Steve!

I've really enjoyed reading this story. The details and characters were very well thought out. And, as an h/c junkie, thanks for throwing Steve over the cliff! LOL! I look forward to more stories from you. Thanks.

Another great chapter! It was fun to read the playful but also necessary flirting between Steve and Ting.

Wow, this chapter was packed with plenty of background information on the shady characters as well as Steve's undercover profile. Plenty of thought appears to have gone into describing the drug business making it all sound realistic.

Some good insight on Steve's feelings of the undercover operation.

Another great chapter! I sure hope Steve is going to be all right.

Please update soon!

Ash

By the time I read the last three chapters, I was holding my breath! The tension that you built up was incredible and the action so well-described that I could picture it perfectly, especially as I know the area where this part of the story is set. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

It's a terrible cliffhanger! I' can't wait for the next part, the suspense is killing me!