excellent job! this is a pretty emotional scene with a hint of the cuteness that i found in this movie. i love the part where alex talks to junior saying that "Daddy is just having a rough time at the moment", that was really cute! the only thing i found funny was that you wrote "Alex was sure to lock the door as soon as it was SHIT" instead of "Alex was sure to lock the door as soon as it was SHUT". dont kill the messenger, but i just had to point it out for you. otherwise, GREAT JOB! :)

aww, very heart felt story! I soooo love this movie! Should add onto it if u decided not to have her involved in their daughter's life

Very sweet! I love this movie and I wish there were more fanfics.

Not bad writing, It's a strange movie to do fan fiction ambout but hey the each their own. Please keep writing.