I think I'm in love. I'm aware this started as an RP, so awesome job to the two of you. I really love your style and your way of story telling too. I'm also happy that you write longish stories! (aka over 1000 words) Of course none of this even matters unless the characters FEEL right and let me tell ya.. they feel so goooooood. (lol) The omake was absolutely adorable too! Great bonus! Please please please keep up the amazing work, and thank you so much for sharing!

That was a really unique way to explore the fledgling sexual tension between the duo. Personally, I dont ship the pair as lovers but Im among a small minority. The fact that you brought up Barnabys attraction to one night stands actually fits into his personality and age far better than the chaste approach other writers use. I hadnt considered it before but it makes sense. The sparring session between the pair was entertaining and very well written, but I think you sold Tiger short in his defense. He's the same age as most football players and some Olympic athletes, and while he might not have had the stamina for a chase, I think he would have easily overpowered Barnaby in the wrestling. That conversation between Tiger and Nathan was a great eyeroller.

Great story- Thanks for sharing it with us!

really good do more