Very nice - terrific dialog, and I like that her answer would have been the first paragraph of the Declaration of Independence. Very well written and sweet.

I was hyperventilating the whole time I was reading this after he said he had questions...I was going "WHEN IS HE GOING TO ASK HIS QUESTIONS?"

Then, when he finally did ask his questions, I was hyperventilating even more! So swet... sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet...

I love the roses.

What did Toby and Sam and the rest have to DO to get him to say all that stuff? I mean, this is Josh we're talking about.

Very very very sweet.

umust not leave it like that.

make new chapter

i need to see/read about a wedding

we need lots of mini lyman babies

get to writing my friend

please

The story, up until a certain point, is quite good. The interaction between Josh and Donna is excellent, but it took a sharp turn for the worse when the roses came up. Then the story took a definite plunge into the dark firey depths of hell when the whole marriage thing reared its ugly head. I stopped reading after he asked, so its all very possible that she said no. I do really doubt it though, which is really a pity.

Awwww, this is so sweet! The first part was very "Waiting for Godot," but the second part...totally worth it. Beautiful job. Keep writing!

Some of the best J/D banter I have *ever* read! You have got them down cold... loved the bits with the answers/ questions... and could really see Josh getting all hyped up about the numbers in a confined space- but I think my favorite part was when Donna capitulated and gave him the numbers (the time, that is) :) *giggles* Wonderful, wonderful job!