|Reviews for Wiwo'ole|
| Irene Claire 4/4/13 . chapter 1
I can't believe I am only finding this now - it's excellent and spot on. I LOVE it - thanks for sharing!
| Hope06 3/22/13 . chapter 1
I loved this I defintly saw it as concern just as I do in the show so well done
| liamarehorselover 9/15/12 . chapter 1
Nope this is pure Danny. I love it. This is great :)
| Aggie2011 9/10/12 . chapter 1
Yeah, I totally don't agree with whatever reviewers said Danny was making this about himself because this was so DANNY that I loved every minute of it. You're right, Danny does mask concern in anger ALL the time in the show, that's his coping mechanism and you displayed it fabulously. I especially liked how Steve handled it because Steve KNOWS Danny and knows exactly what he was doing. Loved it.
Oh and LOVED the Danny-rants. As I've told you, literally one of my favorite parts of the show and you delivered with them in an awesome fashion. Well done!
| maria005 3/20/12 . chapter 1
I loved Episode 2x10 and love reading stories on it as well and yours is one of my favorites!
| ladylockern 3/17/12 . chapter 1
amazing story and you definately have the character of Danny right on. Ranting in Danny's world is the equivalent of saying I care about you and worry. Having Steve find security in his suroundings when he hears it was icing on the cake well well done wish there was more.
| Lidil 1/12/12 . chapter 1
That was a Danny rant, pure and simple.
Steve knows Danny cares.
And that they have each other's back.
| Mokibobolink 12/24/11 . chapter 1
I still can't believe that people misunderstood this story. I thought Danny going off on Steve was perfect. Those two screaming at each other is exactly how they show they care about each other.
For the record I loved this. Every bit of it. Beginning to end. I think you have the guys down cold and the h/c was lovely.
| wotumba1 12/22/11 . chapter 1
danny's snapping at steve is just expression of his concern and he doesn't mean it bad, right?
| LadyAilith 12/21/11 . chapter 1
In light of your A/N at the end of the story: I don't think they get that Danny rants...a lot. But it's his way of showing he cares enough to be upset. The more Steve's hurt, the louder Danny gets. He's upset that Steve's hurt; he's upset that Steve, again, has gone into where angels fear to tread...
You were able to capture Danny's voice perfectly. Thanks for that because sometimes he's not the easiest character to write. As one of my best friends would say, "Ya done good." :-)
| Emma R2 12/20/11 . chapter 1
I like Danny here - it doesn't seem O.O.C at all and it does make sense that Danny would yell - it is how he cares - the angrier he gets at Steve, the more worried he's been. I also like that you've written it that Steve would take comfort from the rants - despite his sensitivity to sound. I really like your slow build as well - nice work!
| freakin'applepie 12/19/11 . chapter 1
The people who left those reviews apparently don't understand the relationship between Danno and Steve. I think you captured Danny's voice perfectly, and his reaction was completely in character. Well done.
| janie m 12/18/11 . chapter 1
This is a fantastic story, really well written. You have Danny's concern showing as anger really well. If only this had been the show. Love hurt, angsty Danny so thamks.
| Nilah 12/18/11 . chapter 1
I loved your tag. Looking forward to more of you. This is definitely one of my favourites. And I get exactly where Danny is coming from. I believe that their reactions were skillfully handled and well written. Really enjoyed it.
| mcatB 12/18/11 . chapter 1
Loved this! The h/c, the banter, the love... perfect blend, perfect characterizations. Thanks, Kylen!