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| Danny Barefoot 2004-11-10 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. All the things Arwen would want to say, stated with extreme beauty. Great atmosphere. |
| Lossenrhos 2004-01-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was a very touching letter, very in character for Arwen. What a lovely idea to have her writing a letter to Celebrian. Well written, both joyful and sad. Well done! |
| Aislinn Malmeril 2003-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, wow. Very beautiful. Made me cry. Good job! |
| SuperHyperBerryBomb 2003-03-27 ch 1, | abuseThat is truly beautiful. Alcarin. |
| arabella thorne 2002-10-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh...god, this was lovely lovely...what a great idea too...and actually Alena, what an elegant solution to Arwens inability to join her parents in Aman. A letter to her mother..god, really wonderful and most especially the end: heart wrenching! You have a very good use of the language my dear, elegant and precise moving without being sappy...very refined. Be very proud of your ability! |
| rowan 2002-09-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery sweet!!! I was getting a little teary eyed there for a second. :) |
| Gwenethiel 2002-06-06 ch 1, | abuse*sniffles* I love this..you're such an excellent writer! I like the way you protray Arwen and her emotions in this fic. Great job! |
| Lady Cheshire 2002-05-19 ch 1, | abuseBittersweet. To quote Shakesphere 'Parting is such sweet sorrow' Very beautiful. |
| Furius 2002-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful, and a truly nicely done Arwen along with all her emtions. A letter to Celebrian, yes it is probably what she did. |
| Elwen 2002-05-08 ch 1, | abuseDon't change any of this. There is nothing to criticise. It's perfect. Thankyou. |
| Kelsey elf-abuser extrodana... 2002-05-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseALENA! I was having a perfectly nice Wednesday morning and then I read this! It's so sad and so beautifully written kudos to you for making my morning very very depressing. |
| Stories from AngelsFall 2002-05-07 ch 1, | abuseVery pretty. Very sad. :-) ::sniffle:: |
| ashdon () 2002-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuse*howls* aaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww maaan! that was sweet....~Don |
| TDWidow 2002-05-07 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sweet! |
| KT Welsh 2002-05-07 ch 1, | abuseThere is only one word for this. Fantastic. I am truly envious of your talent. Thank you for sharing it with us. |