 Danny Barefoot 2004-11-10 . chapter 1Excellent. All the things Arwen would want to say, stated with extreme beauty. Great atmosphere. |
 Lossenrhos 2004-01-11 . chapter 1That was a very touching letter, very in character for Arwen. What a lovely idea to have her writing a letter to Celebrian. Well written, both joyful and sad. Well done! |
 Aislinn Malmeril 2003-04-04 . chapter 1 Oh, wow. Very beautiful. Made me cry. Good job! |
 SuperHyperBerryBomb 2003-03-27 . chapter 1That is truly beautiful. Alcarin. |
 arabella thorne 2002-10-18 . chapter 1 Oh...god, this was lovely lovely...what a great idea too...and actually Alena, what an elegant solution to Arwens inability to join her parents in Aman.
A letter to her mother..god, really wonderful and most especially the end: heart wrenching!
You have a very good use of the language my dear, elegant and precise moving without being sappy...very refined.
Be very proud of your ability! |
 rowan 2002-09-24 . chapter 1 Very sweet!!! I was getting a little teary eyed there for a second. :) |
 Gwenethiel 2002-06-06 . chapter 1*sniffles* I love this..you're such an excellent writer! I like the way you protray Arwen and her emotions in this fic.
Great job! |
 Lady Cheshire 2002-05-19 . chapter 1Bittersweet.
To quote Shakesphere 'Parting is such sweet sorrow'
Very beautiful. |
 Furius 2002-05-10 . chapter 1This is beautiful, and a truly nicely done Arwen along with all her emtions. A letter to Celebrian, yes it is probably what she did. |
 Elwen 2002-05-08 . chapter 1Don't change any of this. There is nothing to criticise. It's perfect. Thankyou. |
 Kelsey elf-abuser extrodanaire 2002-05-08 . chapter 1 ALENA! I was having a perfectly nice Wednesday morning and then I read this! It's so sad and so beautifully written kudos to you for making my morning very very depressing. |
 Stories from AngelsFall 2002-05-07 . chapter 1Very pretty. Very sad. :-) ::sniffle:: |
 ashdon () 2002-05-07 . chapter 1 *howls* aaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww maaan! that was sweet....~Don |
 TDWidow 2002-05-07 . chapter 1That's so sweet! |
 KT Welsh 2002-05-07 . chapter 1There is only one word for this.
Fantastic.
I am truly envious of your talent. Thank you for sharing it with us. |