So sweet. I am also writing about Persuasion, with a different storyline. Your story was so beautiful )
Cannot wait for the next chapter!

your story is beautiful...

This story is lovely, heartfelt and you have the characters down so well (and the language) that it feels like reading an extension or addendum to Persuasion itself. Please keep writing!

Persuasion is my favourite of all Jane Austen novels. I especially enjoyed the depth of Captain Wentworth’s feelings and emotions. You have brought colour to his character and made him a very modern hero. The chapter is insightful and well written.

I'm enjoying your perspective of Captain Wentworth's thoughts. I like the scenes you've picked out. Hope you will update soon!

Please continue! I love the way your writing the story and am sincerely looking forward to more.

i love persuasion, please update soon!

that is very sweet and touching... I definetly like your Wentworth ) please, continue

Always been a fan of FW's point of view. Please continue

always love reading FW's pov. :)

Good story! I like what you have so far. I liked his line at the end where he realizes he doesn't want to hurt Anne. I'm excited to read more :)

Very nicely done!

This is a nice start. "Not still in love with her" ? - he is a typical male not really knowing his true feelings. THanks for the story.

I love this! I can't wait to read more

I love this. Fred pov can be so beautiful. I'm excited to see where you take this. I like that you used moments from the book and movie to build from- very smart.