Will you make a sequel?

Me personally i'd like to see her getting together with logan but thats just me

I thought this was excellent. I love Scott/Ororo stories when they're written right and this was great. Plus, I enjoyed seeing how much Jean really loves him and I felt kind of sorry for her, but not much. I think she takes Scott for granted in the Marvel comics.

I really loved this. Very touching.

very nicely written.

maybe you can write a sequel where jean moves on.

something like jean/warren or jean/logan

(personally, i'd like the jean/logan)

keep writing